Hi Sivan,
I'm helping Liv put this material together and after the next couple of days I think it will be more apparrent to us where we might need some more writing to come from (as per your request on dramaturgical forum). Your little bus story is very beautiful and evocative and romantic, however in relation to Liv's feedback could I suggest checking out Jen's or Jane's work which has incorporated both poetic modes and everyday observances. Maybe another starting point could be the way to go however I dont believe you need to thoroughly understand all the techno jargon to have a stab. Frankly, I'm quite bewildered by it at most times myself! Will keep you posted.
Rochelle