Sorry its taken me a while. The world just insists on eating me.
Firstly in terms of adjusting the monologue to what is happening on the floor during your rehearsal process please feel free to cut anything that you need to.
Echo is a woman.
In response to our feed back;
1. I have read Joseph's monologue- and its a marvellous, intricate and gory account fo the process of becoming cencored. I would question thought he need for each persons experience of cencored to be the same- back to my comments in the larger forujm about defining the world too strongly- becoming limiting. Perhaps some countries censor differently than others. Perhaps Echo just doesnt remember it but others do? I am not defending this as a position about the neccessity of this point for Echo- as a character- but dramaturgically- for the peice as a whole- how muuch narrative cohesion are you hoping to form, does it actually matter?
i guess this relates to the style of the work you are aiming to present in July- is the form of the work disjointed or is it a narrative work that follows clearly from each thing to the next- creating a sense of Mitniks whole world?
If what you are doing is the latter then I am quite happy to change the experience in Echos.
2. Squash. Sure. Not quite sure how to fram this. Cyber squash. Will write into new draft.
3. Yes will add cencored.
4. Echo's work. To be honest I didnt really think about it clearly- in terms of what she would do day to day. I was responding to some of comments about the demise of available resources- and simply the idea that subterannean resources will become more and more valuable in the future. Also population increasing exponentially along with the gap between rich and poor which translates into those able to insulate them selves against environmental ctatstophy and those not able to.
Echo works for a wealthy country. She is an expert in geology, geography and explosives. Her job is to infiltrate other states and find out about their mineral deposits. Armies are then sent in to contest the area. If her side wins she goes in and supervises the drilling, exploding blah blah i dont know.
maybe ask me more specific quuestions about what you need to know?
In Response to Olivia's Feedback
Sorry its taken me a while. The world just insists on eating me.
Firstly in terms of adjusting the monologue to what is happening on the floor during your rehearsal process please feel free to cut anything that you need to.
Echo is a woman.
In response to our feed back;
1. I have read Joseph's monologue- and its a marvellous, intricate and gory account fo the process of becoming cencored. I would question thought he need for each persons experience of cencored to be the same- back to my comments in the larger forujm about defining the world too strongly- becoming limiting. Perhaps some countries censor differently than others. Perhaps Echo just doesnt remember it but others do? I am not defending this as a position about the neccessity of this point for Echo- as a character- but dramaturgically- for the peice as a whole- how muuch narrative cohesion are you hoping to form, does it actually matter?
i guess this relates to the style of the work you are aiming to present in July- is the form of the work disjointed or is it a narrative work that follows clearly from each thing to the next- creating a sense of Mitniks whole world?
If what you are doing is the latter then I am quite happy to change the experience in Echos.
2. Squash. Sure. Not quite sure how to fram this. Cyber squash. Will write into new draft.
3. Yes will add cencored.
4. Echo's work. To be honest I didnt really think about it clearly- in terms of what she would do day to day. I was responding to some of comments about the demise of available resources- and simply the idea that subterannean resources will become more and more valuable in the future. Also population increasing exponentially along with the gap between rich and poor which translates into those able to insulate them selves against environmental ctatstophy and those not able to.
Echo works for a wealthy country. She is an expert in geology, geography and explosives. Her job is to infiltrate other states and find out about their mineral deposits. Armies are then sent in to contest the area. If her side wins she goes in and supervises the drilling, exploding blah blah i dont know.
maybe ask me more specific quuestions about what you need to know?
willoh