Submitted by josephcoelho on Thu, 25/05/2006 - 11:44.
I love the idea of missing touch and sensation, highlighs a very tangible result of becoming 'Censored', I also love the fact that the protagonist views their floating sensation as a purgatory, this is a really interesting idea, what if you were trapped in a heaven or hell of your own creation! I enjoyed the frustaations felt of the inane chat that we can all relate to and the way you effortlessly weave sory into the text so that we get an idea of the past and the situation of the worlkd we are in.
I love the idea of missing to
I love the idea of missing touch and sensation, highlighs a very tangible result of becoming 'Censored', I also love the fact that the protagonist views their floating sensation as a purgatory, this is a really interesting idea, what if you were trapped in a heaven or hell of your own creation! I enjoyed the frustaations felt of the inane chat that we can all relate to and the way you effortlessly weave sory into the text so that we get an idea of the past and the situation of the worlkd we are in.